to walk upon you - O mountains of Israel (Eze 36:8)!
thee ... thou - change from plural to singular: O hill of Zion, singled out from the other mountains of Israel (Eze 34:26); or land.
thou shall no more ... bereave them of men - Thou shalt no more provoke God to bereave them of children (so the ellipsis ought to be supplied, as Ezekiel probably alludes to Jer 15:7, “I will bereave them of children”).